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down
below the sea level
seeking
under the deep-water line
of my mind
sinking
falling slowly into the sea
of my roots and shadows,
come across my
sin(s )– king-sized
just for meet and
see Queen Ereshkigal,
go through her
hard and cruel trial
message -
flash of watch-light
rising up
I met white-whale care
I´m lucky,
I have friends
I´m recovering
on surface
—-
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below the sea level
seeking
under the deep-water line
of my mind
sinking
falling slowly into the sea
of my roots and shadows,
come across my
sin(s )– king-sized
just for meet and
see Queen Ereshkigal,
go through her
hard and cruel trial
message -
flash of watch-light
rising up
I met white-whale care
I´m lucky,
I have friends
I´m recovering
on surface
—-
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» 07.10.2008
» komentářů: 11
» 07.10.2008 - 07:06
SZN:
they are flihht down and falls up and everything for only...
they are flihht down and falls up and everything for only...
» 07.10.2008 - 09:09
JardaCH:
... hmmm ... tajná řeč ... co tam dělá ta bílá velryba? ... ... a roboti dí HOP ... zase mě dostali ...
... hmmm ... tajná řeč ... co tam dělá ta bílá velryba? ... ... a roboti dí HOP ... zase mě dostali ...
» 07.10.2008 - 09:40
Siorak:
I am glad to have an opportunity to see the part of the iceberg of your mind. I suppose the under-waterline is the same because you gave us your heart on your open hands.
I am glad to have an opportunity to see the part of the iceberg of your mind. I suppose the under-waterline is the same because you gave us your heart on your open hands.
» 07.10.2008 - 10:24
Konec konců:
Your poesy is beauteos. You have a flyting for writing in English. Siorak wrote his comment very good. Your poesy has good idea. I clik ST! P.S. Omlouvám se za případné chyby, už je to nějaký pátek, co jsem ANJ nepoužívala.
Your poesy is beauteos. You have a flyting for writing in English. Siorak wrote his comment very good. Your poesy has good idea. I clik ST! P.S. Omlouvám se za případné chyby, už je to nějaký pátek, co jsem ANJ nepoužívala.
» 07.10.2008 - 10:40
6thSun:
I’m afraid I’m not so good in English to underestand exactly each word. But I touched the point and it definitely deserved simple tip. I guess
I’m afraid I’m not so good in English to underestand exactly each word. But I touched the point and it definitely deserved simple tip. I guess
» 07.10.2008 - 10:57
Dota Slunská:
You´re most certainly lucky to have friends, dear. I´m quite sure the full recovery comes up from under the surface to fill you up. It feels like there appears a sort of desperate subaqueous outcry that´s been appeased by the real consolation in life.:)
You´re most certainly lucky to have friends, dear. I´m quite sure the full recovery comes up from under the surface to fill you up. It feels like there appears a sort of desperate subaqueous outcry that´s been appeased by the real consolation in life.:)
» 07.10.2008 - 14:57
Efiee:
Just 1 word 4 U...it’s SUPERB!
Just 1 word 4 U...it’s SUPERB!
» 07.10.2008 - 16:30
Simísek...:
Like your poems, but in czech it’s really better and closer to my heart:)
Like your poems, but in czech it’s really better and closer to my heart:)
» 09.10.2008 - 07:56
saddova:
so... good, but i like only czech words in this czech server... so sorry, but I can´t give tip... - taky se omlouvam za chyby, spis mluvim nez pisu a mluvim, tak jak se chce me
so... good, but i like only czech words in this czech server... so sorry, but I can´t give tip... - taky se omlouvam za chyby, spis mluvim nez pisu a mluvim, tak jak se chce me
» 09.10.2008 - 11:02
Noc17:
Tééda tak to já dávám ST a dala bych jich milion..BRAVO Lady Mylady )
Tééda tak to já dávám ST a dala bych jich milion..BRAVO Lady Mylady )
» 10.10.2008 - 20:26
jehlaspichlas:
Allways seeking, allways asking, questions write from
the start. Out beyond the new frontier, playing God,
without fear, cread a beast a man without the soul.
Who the risk, who of got at man.... /Iron maiden – New frontier)
Allways seeking, allways asking, questions write from
the start. Out beyond the new frontier, playing God,
without fear, cread a beast a man without the soul.
Who the risk, who of got at man.... /Iron maiden – New frontier)
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